11/5/09

diamonds in the shadow 11/5

    I think that alake changed the most from the beginning to the end because in the biginning she would not talk or interact with anybody but through the story she progressed and now she will communicate and even learned email she thinks of mopsy as her sister and says she loves her.


   i think the turning point for alake was when she was learning the email and typed in ilovyojopsy because even though she had lost her sister she was beginning to think about mopsy and the rest of the finches as her real family because she had no real familyof her own.

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  1. Very good insight. I agree that the email was probably the turning point for Alake.

    Watch your capitalization, spelling and sentence structure.

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